Tone of Voice

PlayHQ’s tone of voice is clear, confident and passionate.

Remember that coach you had for high school footy who was full of great strategies, always knew just how to describe them, and never let ego or competition get in the way of a good game?

Even if you never had a coach like that, you can easily imagine them: explaining large concepts with simple language – passion and purpose fuelling the why in every order they give and each observation they make. They’re a reassuring and inspiring figure.

At a corporate level, PlayHQ speaks with the assertiveness of a fast-growing tech company, whilst evoking the passion of the hundreds of human beings behind the brand.

This extends to the community we service as well – PlayHQ may be data-driven innovators, but we care deeply about the people and experiences at the heart of community sports. Players are more than users, and clubs are more than clients

Brand Voice

PlayHQ is the new home of community sport.

This short sentence gives us a rich overview of what PlayHQ represents as a brand.

“New”…
This is innovation and aspiration. PlayHQ is tapping into dormant potential and finding new ways to channel it out into the world.

“Home”…
This evokes familiarity, but also confidence – a home is a place that you know and trust. It’s where you start a new journey from, and where you always return to.

“Community”…
This is ultimately why PlayHQ does what it does. It speaks to a belief in the transformative possibilities of sport, and the magic that happens when people work together.

Nationality

PlayHQ is an Australian organisation, but as we look to extend into international markets over the coming years, we want to avoid tying our company’s identity to any one culture or nationality. After all, we believe that sport is a universal language.

As PlayHQ’s comms become more tailored to different territories, we can certainly reflect on their unique sporting culture – but this should never extend into cliché or caricature.

Time to grab the eski and fire up the barbie and enjoy the cricket with your mates!
The days are getting longer and the weather’s heating up – which means cricket season is fast-approaching.

Point-of-view

PlayHQ comms should be written from the general perspective of someone within the PlayHQ organisation. Avoid “I” and “me”, but refer to “us” or “we”.

This is PlayHQ. Find out more.
We’re PlayHQ. It’s great to meet you.
I’d love to talk to you about Live Scoring.
Head to our website to learn more about out Live Scoring.

Naming

With multiple stakeholders, both internal and external, it’s important to keep track of who’s who, and to refer to them accurately. Here are some useful terms:

  • PlayHQ is a sports tech company.
  • Its product is a SaaS / turnkey software solution.
  • More colloquially, the PlayHQ product can be referred to as the platform, made up of features.
  • PlayHQ staff are team members, or the team.
  • The group of people using PlayHQ – including NSOs, admins, players and participants – can be broadly referred to as the PlayHQ community.
  • Within this, you have partners – governing bodies and associations who have a business relationship with PlayHQ.
  • Then you have the individuals – admins, volunteers, players, participants and parents – the people who access PlayHQ features on a regular basis.
  • Internally, partners may also be called clients, just as participants may be called users or customers.

Consider the context when choosing how to refer to any of these stakeholders. In support articles and internal comms, it makes sense to use “customer” or “user” – but when addressing people directly, these words can come across as corporate and mercantile. Opt for warmer, more human-centric language wherever possible.

Active voice

Using active voice means leading with the subject of the sentence, and focusing on their action. In the following sentence, the “sporting community” is not the subject carrying out the action (the “lifting up”) – so don’t start with them. Start with the “we”.

Sporting communities will be lifted up by our commitment.
We’re committed to lifting up sporting communities.

Be concise

PlayHQ’s confidence should be conveyed through the precision of its language; we don’t write in convoluted, flowery sentences. When describing something, try to use one adjective only. And make sure every sentence has a purpose – a why.

Instead of counting all your money, securing it, then taking it all the way to the bank, PlayHQ’s fast and cash-free payment and payout features mean you can reconcile all your finances on the spot, without ever having to take another trip to the bank ever again!
Cashless payments and payouts mean no more trips to the bank. Ever.

Be impactful

Run-on sentences can be difficult to understand, and easily lose their impact. Any time you’re placing a comma in a sentence, ask yourself: could this be a full stop instead? Also be wary of adverbs and words like “just” or “really”. Would your passage read more powerfully without them?

Lauren Jackson and Sue Bird, Michael Jordan and Scottie Pippen, Broadmeadows Basketball Club and PlayHQ, we just really love being part of a dynamic duo.
Lauren Jackson and Sue Bird. Michael Jordan and Scottie Pippen. Broadmeadows Basketball Club and PlayHQ. We love being part of a dynamic duo.

Don’t be salesy

PlayHQ is a company selling a product, but we never want this to overshadow our passion for sport. Discussions around money and pricing should be upfront and honest. Everyone values transparency over spin.

For a low, low price of just $1 per user! (First year only, plus fees.)
Pricing starts from $1 per user in the first year, plus transaction fees.

Avoid clichés

It can be tempting to lapse into stereotypical formulations, especially when creating social or blog posts. Avoid the temptation to start articles with phrases like “Did you know?”, “Fun fact!”, or “Life’s too short to…”

Humour

Writing PlayHQ copy lends itself to sports-infused wordplay. In this instance, always err on the side of restraint. If a phrase feels too punny, cheesy or forced, try dialling it back. Also try to avoid cramming multiple sports metaphors into a single sentence.

Time to slip on your cleats and knock your merchandise management out of the park!
Merchandise management in a league of its own.

Inclusiveness

All PlayHQ comms should champion inclusiveness and acceptance. This means avoiding cultural stereotypes, and thinking twice about any language that could be perceived as exclusionary or ableist.

Pre-season can be totally insane!
Pre-season is a busy time for everyone.

Plain language

Try to avoid industry jargon, technical acronyms, or overly-colloquial slang. This can be alienating to people of certain ages, or from different cultural or linguistic backgrounds.

Of course, this depends on context. Pages aimed at admins or organisations could contain terms like “SaaS” and “turnkey”, but you wouldn’t use these words in a passage aimed at players and their parents.

Write like you speak

The easiest way to double-check your written content is to read it out loud. PlayHQ is a company of humans, and we want to sound like it. If something sounds awkward or overly formal, find another way to write it. If in doubt – read it out.

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Tone of voice summary

Every word you write under the PlayHQ banner is a delicate tonal balancing act. Here’s a visual representation of where the brand’s voice sits on the spectrum of a few different personality traits.

Little guy

Tech giant

Cheeky humour

Dry humour

Lifestyle brand

Sales-focused

Proud

Humble

Intuitive

Data-driven

To summarise another way, PlayHQ is:

Confident but not cocky
Friendly but not folksy
Clever but not comedic
Energetic but not overbearing
Aspirational but not sentimental
Straightforward but not simplistic
Engaging but not entertaining

Thought starters

Any time you’re setting out to create written copy for PlayHQ, pause for a moment and ask yourself these two questions:

What’s the why?
What is the purpose of your content – even the purpose of an individual sentence? There should be a sense of momentum and intention in everything you write. Sure, that’s a cool new feature. But why does it matter?

Who’s the you?
Know your audience. Being clear about who you’re addressing with your copy will help you tailor the language and tone. Club admins? Association treasurers? Parents of players? It all comes down to empathy – meeting people at their level of engagement and expertise and communicating with them there.

Channels

Some rules-of-thumb for writing PlayHQ content across different channels.

Website

The PlayHQ corporate website is dense with information, and its content is intended for a wide range of audiences.

  • Write in full sentences – no slang, no emojis. This is us putting our best foot forward, wearing our nicest shirt for a job interview.
  • Know the audience for each page, and write for them. Avoid switching audience context mid-page (or worse, mid-sentence).
  • Feel free to use technical lingo and jargon where appropriate, but hold back on higher-level pages. Focus on plain language instead
Example
Rookies welcome.
With its universal design and intuitive features, PlayHQ is easy to learn and even easier to use. We designed it for people of all ages, experiences and backgrounds – so anyone in your organisation can jump right in and get down to work.

EDMs

Our EDMs are a bridge to connecting audiences with more long-form content; blog posts, support articles, feature pages, and so on. So keep your introductory paragraph short and snappy, and focus on incentivizing the reader to click through. If you tell them everything there is to know about a new feature right there in the EDM, what reason do they have to click on Find out more?

Example
Squad Details
With the new Squad view, you can see participant profiles, parent or guardian information and emergency contact details – meaning less emailing and fewer phone calls for your support staff. Find out more.

Socials

When it comes to captions on social posts, the shorter the better. Let the content, whatever it may be, do the talking. And if the content you're captioning features text, avoid repeating that text in the caption.

Example
ICYMI, here’s a round-up of every new feature PlayHQ announced this past season – and there’s plenty more in the pipeline.

Press releases

Be proud, but humble. Be excited, but never salesy. Remember, we don’t need to trick or con anybody into believing in the power of PlayHQ’s capabilities – our features speak for themselves. In press comms, be especially wary of cheesy sports metaphors.

Example
A community sport revolution: with the release of new Live Scoring feature, PlayHQ changes the game again.

Help and support

Support articles are always going to be a bit dry – there’s no way around that. Their purpose is to convey technical information as simply, precisely and honestly as possible. Avoid any subjective assessments like “it couldn’t be easier”.

Make your text work hand-in-hand with the supplementary images, and use additional formatting liberally; breaking up sentences with dashes, separating steps with chevrons (>) and bolding key features or items can be a huge help to the reader.

Example
From the menu, click My Organisation > Admins – then click the Invite new admin button. From there, enter the Admin Details for the administrator you wish to invite.

Spelling, Grammar & Formatting

At PlayHQ, we write in Australian English at all times. Many programs, word processors, and even smartphones still default to American or British English, so keep an eye out for words like “organization”, “favorite”, “programme” and “color”.

As PlayHQ expands into international markets, this rule should be reconsidered – if, one day, PlayHQ has unique websites, mailing lists, or social accounts for different territories, then the spelling and grammar rules of those territories should be adhered to on an account-by-account basis.

Punctuation

Ampersands

Ampersands should only ever be used as a graphic element within headings and subheadings. They should never be used as a substitute for the word “and” in a sentence.

A combined payment & registration portal for sports clubs.
Payments & Registrations

Hypens

Use hyphens (-) to create compound words.

A combined payment & registration portal for sports clubs.
user-friendly
real-time
cloud-based

Em dash

Use en dashes (—) to indicate ranges of times or numbers, or to break up a sentence — like this one.

6 –12 months
2018 – 2022
1 – 2pm

Oxford comma

Avoid using the Oxford comma unless its absence creates ambiguity (they can sometimes be necessary when writing out long lists).

sports, clubs, and their players
sports, clubs and their players

Ellipses

Ellipses create unnecessary tension and take up space. They may be appropriate in socials or blog posts – just don’t overuse them.

Amateur sports… professional payments…
Amateur sports. Professional payments.

Exclamation points

Exclamation points are a powerful tool, but must be used sparingly. Try to choose the one sentence or remark that really deserves an exclamation point in your article or post – and only ever use one at a time.

That’s it for today! See you at the game!!!
Until next time – we’ll see you at the game!

Apostrophe

A single apostrophe should be applied to plural nouns to make them possessive.

Users’s privacy
Users’ privacy

Colons and lists

Text.